I really like the entire composition a lot. The value range in the bottom half is really nice, and the background of stars with the large moon covered by clouds compliments the foreground well. The only thing I notice that may seem a little off is the shape of the moon - I think it doesn't quite look circular - but it's not a big deal.
Your piece looks magical. I liked that you took away some of the lights on the sides of the cliff and added a few more clouds. I still wish the cloud at the peek of the mountain was moved slightly to the right so more of the mountain would be shown.
The icy, reflective surface of the bottom half is well done. Like ^ said, the moon does look a little wobbly. It's not that serious, but fixing it would help the whole image as a whole. The little mountains in the back look a little liney. Maybe a soft mist around the base of the mountain to take attention away from it?
I really like the entire composition a lot. The value range in the bottom half is really nice, and the background of stars with the large moon covered by clouds compliments the foreground well. The only thing I notice that may seem a little off is the shape of the moon - I think it doesn't quite look circular - but it's not a big deal.
ReplyDeleteYour piece looks magical. I liked that you took away some of the lights on the sides of the cliff and added a few more clouds. I still wish the cloud at the peek of the mountain was moved slightly to the right so more of the mountain would be shown.
ReplyDeleteThe icy, reflective surface of the bottom half is well done. Like ^ said, the moon does look a little wobbly. It's not that serious, but fixing it would help the whole image as a whole. The little mountains in the back look a little liney. Maybe a soft mist around the base of the mountain to take attention away from it?
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