I definitely like the yellow coloring on the land where the palm trees are and the shadowing. I still wish that there was less of a blurry halo around the palm tree but over all I really like it.
The area of the blur is slightly too much. If you could reduce some of the blur extending to the right of the palm trees, it would improve the feel of the image. The moon thing's texture is a little out of place. Maybe applying the same texture of the sky to the moon? The texture of the moon is unique, so I don't know if you had intentionally left it alone.
The water is still my favourite part of this, because of how unsettling it looks. The sun looks much more intimidating too, but it blends in with the sky now. I'm not sure if darkening the sky would have the effect you want, but it might do something. Also, there are now a lot of circular looking things in the sky? Is it a lot of planets? That would be pretty rad.
I definitely like the yellow coloring on the land where the palm trees are and the shadowing. I still wish that there was less of a blurry halo around the palm tree but over all I really like it.
ReplyDeleteThe area of the blur is slightly too much. If you could reduce some of the blur extending to the right of the palm trees, it would improve the feel of the image. The moon thing's texture is a little out of place. Maybe applying the same texture of the sky to the moon? The texture of the moon is unique, so I don't know if you had intentionally left it alone.
ReplyDeleteThe water is still my favourite part of this, because of how unsettling it looks. The sun looks much more intimidating too, but it blends in with the sky now. I'm not sure if darkening the sky would have the effect you want, but it might do something. Also, there are now a lot of circular looking things in the sky? Is it a lot of planets? That would be pretty rad.
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